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diff --git a/doc/tips/public_Amazon_S3_remote.mdwn b/doc/tips/public_Amazon_S3_remote.mdwn
index 0140445c4..a1fb7f6f2 100644
--- a/doc/tips/public_Amazon_S3_remote.mdwn
+++ b/doc/tips/public_Amazon_S3_remote.mdwn
@@ -17,12 +17,16 @@ Now, create the remote:
 	# git annex initremote pubs3 type=S3 encryption=none public=yes
 	initremote pubs3 (checking bucket) (creating bucket in US) ok
 
-In the above example, no encryption was used, but it will also work
-if you enable eg, encryption=shared. It's also ok to enable chunking.
-
 The public=yes is the crtical part; this lets the public read the contents
 of the bucket.
 
+In the above example, no encryption was used, but it will also work
+if you enable encryption=shared. Then files will be encrypted on S3, and
+anyone with a clone of the git repository will be able to download and
+decrypt them.
+
+It's also ok to enable chunking when setting up the remote.
+
 Now, copy some files to the remote, in the usual way, and push your
 git repository to someplace where someone else can access it.