spelling/grammar/wording/formatting

git-svn-id: svn://svn.mplayerhq.hu/mplayer/trunk@25335 b3059339-0415-0410-9bf9-f77b7e298cf2

1 files changed, 15 insertions, 16 deletions

diff --git a/DOCS/tech/dvdnav-howto.txt b/DOCS/tech/dvdnav-howto.txt
index 98de47f499..005a85cd00 100644
--- a/DOCS/tech/dvdnav-howto.txt
+++ b/DOCS/tech/dvdnav-howto.txt
@@ -1,9 +1,8 @@
-How to compile mplayer with support for dvdnav:
+How to compile MPlayer with support for dvdnav:
 
-since the versions of dvdnav and dvdread generally shipped with most Linux
-distributions are generally outdated and unmaintained remove any piece of
-dvdnav and dvdread from your computer (something like the command below
-should suffice):
+Since the versions of dvdnav and dvdread generally shipped with most Linux
+distributions are outdated and unmaintained remove any traces of dvdnav and
+dvdread from your computer (something like the command below should suffice):
 $ rm -rf /usr/lib/libdvdnav* /usr/lib/libdvdread* /usr/include/dvdnav* \
          /usr/include/dvdread* /usr/local/lib/libdvdnav* \
          /usr/local/lib/libdvdread* /usr/local/include/dvdnav* \
@@ -14,21 +13,21 @@ Now download dvdnav from MPHQ (dvdnav includes its own version of dvdread):
 $ svn co svn://svn.mplayerhq.hu/dvdnav/trunk/libdvdnav libdvdnav
 $ cd libdvdnav
 $ ./autogen.sh && ./configure && make
-(or, if you feel brave and want to help us improving the new build system,
+(or, if you feel brave and want to help us improve the new build system)
 $ ./configure2 && make
-) 
 install it as root with
 $ make install
 
-Cd to MPlyer's source tree and configure mplayer with the following command:
+From within the MPlayer source tree run
 $ ./configure --disable-dvdread-internal
 followed by your preferred parameters.
-After ./configure is run it should say that support for dvdnav and dvdread was enabled,
-otherwise investigate in configure.log the sections relative to the two libraries
-and try to understand what went wrong; if you can't solve the problem yourself
-post to mplayer-users the two sections.
+After configure is run it should say that support for dvdnav and dvdread was
+enabled. If not, investigate the dvdnav and dvdread sections in configure.log
+and try to understand what went wrong. If you can't solve the problem yourself
+post the two sections to mplayer-users.
 
-Notice: animated menus are working, but still menus and still scenes are not yet supported.
-Also, audio and subtitle languages selection by means of menus don't work yet, but
-they can be switched as usual at any time during playback pressing '#' and 'j'
-(or with the keys you chose to override those two bindings).
+Notice: Animated menus are working, but still menus and still scenes are not
+yet supported. Also, audio and subtitle language selection by means of menus
+doesn't work yet. Nonetheless they can be switched as usual at any time during
+playback by pressing '#' and 'j' (or the keys you chose to override those two
+bindings).